Feedback from the mid-unit review and first draft essy...

So I had my one-to-one with Matt today and it's great to hear that I'm on track when I'd been worrying that perhaps I wasn't. He supplied with me with strengths and weaknesses from the powerpoint which I presented with my Lo's and for my first draft essay. Everything was good apart from my essay which he felt the conclusion wasn't strong enough. He also recommended to interweave theories from Abbie Solomon-Godeau and John Bergers as it would relate greatly with some of the theories about the insider/ outsider approach mentioned in my essay.

Apart from that, and that I need to talk A LOT slower during presentations, I'm very pleased with my progress so far throughout unit Ba1b and feel that I may be able to achieve slightly higher, which is my goal, than the grade received from our first unit Ba1a.